Feedback (changes)

My group and I pitched our idea to a group of our peers and received feedback on our initial ideas, the feedback that we received was very constructive and i believe we can make our film better as a result of the feedback given to us.The group of our peers queried the basis of our story line and said that they needed to be able to be enticed by the story and be made to want to watch it and if we were to continue with the idea that we show a rich man flashback to the story of how he got rich then they would not connect with him and we would not get as many views of the film that we want so therefore we are going to change the beginning of our film to make sure that people want to watch and to show that he is not guaranteed to come out on top so we milk the mystery aspect that nobody quite knows what is going to happen to him. We are going to change it so that we show him at Gunpoint and then we flashback to how he got in to that god damn mess, making this change in our film is going to be better over all as it makes the voyeur want to continue viewing the film as it is exciting due to the fact that the story is unpredictable as you know that he gets to that point but you do not know the outcome of the encounter and you also will have no idea of how he got to that stage so that it has a mystery element mixed with the action which will make for one very unpredictable and chilling film were mystery shrouds the end so you do not know if he triumphs or fails.